Luna ([info]lunasky) wrote,
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Veronica Mars Ficlet

You know, having watched Veronica Mars just recently, I missed out on all the episode talks and speculation that went on throughout the season. I was just thinking about this because I have no idea how people feel about the different characters. Take Leo for instance. I actually really liked him, and liked him with Veronica (at least more than I liked Veronica and Duncan together). I find this odd, because usually, the token temporary boyfriend is usually annoying and two-dimensional.

Just chalk another one up to Rob Thomas's genious, I guess.

So anyways, after watching 1.19 - Hot Dogs last night, this little ficlet got stuck in my brain. So go and be free! Get out of my head, because it's getting crowded in there. :)


Title:Train Wrecks and Rent Checks
Rating: PG
Spoilers: 1x19. Hot Dogs


“Trust me, you don't want to date me. I'm a train wreck.”

Veronica’s voice echoed in his mind as Leo rubbed the back of his neck. He idly picked up the drawing that Karl the sketch artist had drawn and traced the lines with his eyes. He couldn’t even claim that he hadn’t been warned.

“I have a favor to ask.”

Was it all just a ploy? Her sweet smile, her tempting kisses. It still hurt that she had used him to steal the 911 tape.

Then she had used him to get the interrogation tapes.

And the phone calls for the vet clinic.

And then the raid on the dog pound.

In the end though, it didn’t matter if it had all been a ruse, because he would do it all over again. His life was pretty neat. He had a job that kept him busy, he had a band he liked to play in. His mother called him every Sunday, and his biggest worry this month was to remember that it was April and the rent was due on the 30th instead of the 31st.

He tapped his fingers on his desk and they echoed in the empty office. The clock on the wall ticked past three. He wondered if she was sleeping, and who was occupying her dreams tonight. He wished it was him, but he doubted if it had ever been. She always seemed to move in twelve directions at once. He had no idea how she kept everything straight in her head, but she just had a way of enthralling you.

If he was honest, that was part of her charm. He had been drawn to the madness in her life, with part of him craving a ride on her coattails. Maybe that had been the problem. He had always been a little too steady for her, slowing her down and keeping her grounded instead of letting her fly free.

But then, that was the nature of train wrecks, he thought as he sighed and tossed the sketch away. They blocked up traffic for miles because of all the damn rubberneckers stopping to have a look. They were big and disastrous and nobody ever really forgot about them, even after they were cleaned up.

~~~




Have I mentioned that I go back to work on Tuesday? The hubby's taking over Parental Leave for 4 months. I have to spend the weekend hubby-proofing the house. *g*

I don't think I'm ready to go back just yet though. *sigh*
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[info]ciachick711

September 2 2005, 09:16:37 UTC 6 years ago

Awww I love Leo, so I'm really glad you wrote this. I wish there was more Veronica/Leo fic.

[info]lunasky

September 2 2005, 09:26:01 UTC 6 years ago

Thanks. :) I have a craving to read more about them too. If you find any fics, drop me a link?

[info]chele74

September 2 2005, 09:21:09 UTC 6 years ago

Very nice. *g* I always liked Leo, even if we all knew that relationship wasn't going to last, and I've always liked the rather complicated way in which she used people. Nice job!

(One tiny typo, btw: Was it all just a ploy? Her sweet smile, her tempting kisses.)

[info]lunasky

September 2 2005, 09:31:25 UTC 6 years ago

I'm glad you liked. :) And thanks for the heads up. Damn typos.

I think the thing I liked most about Leo is that he wasn't just the token boyfriend filler. They actually took time to give him a character outside their relationship with him helping in the investigation of the serial killer and then arresting the Russians. And it was a nice change to see the lead character actually own up to breaking off the relationship. (I really had to force myself to put the period there, otherwise I was going to make yet another comparision to Alias which ironically is it's own train wreck but in a much more tragic sense).

[info]melting4you

September 2 2005, 13:31:46 UTC 6 years ago

He tapped his fingers on his desk and they echoed in the empty office. The clock on the wall ticked past three. He wondered if she was sleeping, and who was occupying her dreams tonight. He wished it was him, but he doubted if it had ever been. She always seemed to move in twelve directions at once. He had no idea how she kept everything straight in her head, but she just had a way of enthralling you.

To be honest, that had been part of her charm. He had been drawn to the madness in her life, with part of him craving a ride on her coattails. But then, maybe that had been the problem. He had always been a little too steady for her, slowing her down and keeping her grounded instead of letting her fly free.


You wrote his view so honestly and real. I hope you write more of these b/c I like Veronica and Leo. Great job! :)

[info]lunasky

September 2 2005, 18:44:53 UTC 6 years ago

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! :)

[info]passionflows

September 2 2005, 13:40:18 UTC 6 years ago

Aww, I really like this. I'm not a big fan of Veronica/Leo but I've come to appreciate him in retrospect (like you, I like him more than Duncan with Veronica), so this was nice. I think you pretty much hit the nail on the head when it comes to his thoughts on his relationship with her.

[info]lunasky

September 2 2005, 18:47:13 UTC 6 years ago

Thanks for the comment, I'm glad you liked it. I'm not sure why Duncan/Veronica just doesn't do it for me...maybe because he was so stoic with her last season, he just seems so flat to me. Leo on the other hand, I actually really felt sorry for.

[info]brokenroads

September 2 2005, 14:46:29 UTC 6 years ago

Awww Leo! Sniff I felt so bad for him. :( *hugs him* great story!

[info]lunasky

September 2 2005, 18:47:33 UTC 6 years ago

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :)

[info]autobadgirl

September 6 2005, 13:52:12 UTC 6 years ago

Hey! That was a nifty snippet to find! I, too, liked Leo and Veronica together, but I've fallen hard for Logan/Veronica lately.

[info]lunasky

September 6 2005, 20:49:44 UTC 6 years ago

Oh, I know. I've got it bad for Veronica/Logan too. Actually, I just love them all. Rob Thomas rocks. :)

[info]viciouswishes

November 27 2005, 04:06:42 UTC 6 years ago

Nice little glimpse at them.

[info]lunasky

November 27 2005, 16:35:58 UTC 6 years ago

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. :)
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